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Post by yuki09 on Feb 13, 2008 0:45:03 GMT -5
[Okay here goes nothing!]
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Post by Marguerite on Feb 13, 2008 0:56:46 GMT -5
Okay, your first-person prompt (i.e. the prompt you respond to in first person) is:
Apple.
Go for it!
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Post by yuki09 on Feb 13, 2008 1:10:29 GMT -5
Looking around the small farm with my pale amber eyes I realized that the place my parents had told me about so many times before, was filled with not cows or funny looking chickens, but apples!
Running up to the Farmer I asked in the strongest voice I could muster, "May I pick a few of them?"
He smiled at me, as he handed me a bag and pushed my slim little, figure on off into the apple orchard. I quickly started gathering apples, they all looked so good!
Soon my bag was fully of the yummy granny smiths, and I was tired of running so I laid down under on of the trees and munched on a juicy apple. A little dribble of the juice rolled down my tan chin, and onto my shirt which was now all covered in dirt. I mumbled to myself happily, "This is the life for me."
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Post by yuki09 on Feb 13, 2008 1:10:59 GMT -5
[Oh bullux, it's so short!]
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Post by Marguerite on Feb 13, 2008 1:33:35 GMT -5
Very sweet! And, no worries, we like short. Here's your third person bit (i.e. reply to it in the third person):
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"Hey!" the apple tree shouted, bending down a branch to poke her in the back. "What'd you go and do that for? Do I pull off your hair? Give me my apples back!"
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Post by yuki09 on Feb 13, 2008 8:36:53 GMT -5
"EEK!" Yuki cried jumping to her feet. She looked at the mysterious apple tree and said, "Well, we eat your, um, hair all the time. It's just so very good!" The apple tree did not look convinced and those long, hard branches where looking quite scary to Yuki
"Let me tell you something! You should think of it as a compliment, as saying I like your apple hair so much that I wanted it for myself!" Yuki said, putting an apple to her head and making it look like her hair.
Now the apple tree looked convinced, and flattered all at the same time.
"You see, we like you, and that's why we take you hair! Your hair also keeps our tummy's fully so that we can continue to admire your beautiful apples!" she said stating her point.
And with that Yuki bowed to the apple tree and took off running back to the farm.
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Post by Miss Jack on Feb 13, 2008 23:54:06 GMT -5
You're approved. Get on that character sheet, girl. ^^
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